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Guest (Guest), August 28th, 2007, 3:31 pm

Plot holes
Some parents' stories don't have plot holes. Some ungrateful kids have attention span holes.


boredomcomics, August 29th, 2007, 5:33 pm


So, a few things...

-The "x character is sooooooooooo stupid" is kinda played out beyond belief. Really. It's boring to read. As a result, I'm more of a fan of the non-Sonic strips you've been doing simply because unbelievably stupid just isn't funny.
-The backgrounds you're using for the comics recently really clash with the sprites. Like, it just doesn't look very good. It kinda looks like the SMW sprites are now M&L in this recent comic though, so I guess it's better now?
-Lazy writing. That's the best way to describe #16. Because that's essentially what author characters can do. If you must have an author character, at least don't make him this giant, "Oh, I'll just do this and fix everything!" device. (otherwise known as deus ex machina)
-The spelling and grammar? Good. The dialogue? Great. You're doing good in that area, so keep it up.

... So... yeah...


Elecrusher (Guest), August 30th, 2007, 5:01 pm

Dont Feel Like Logging In Right Now....
-Lazy writing. That's the best way to describe #16. Because that's essentially what author characters can do. If you must have an author character, at least don't make him this giant, "Oh, I'll just do this and fix everything!" device. (otherwise known as deus ex machina)

It's called... Co-Author powers...


boredomcomics, September 5th, 2007, 7:40 pm


No, it's called lazy writing. Author characters are the very definition of that. That's why people don't like them. That, and the whole "Mary Sue" thing.


Jo (Guest), April 29th, 2008, 2:02 am


This isn't serious fiction, it's a webcomic. Nobody cares.


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